Sam’s 100 wc challenge week/6
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One sunny afternoon a twenty two year old was trying to get his driving licence so he could drive to football (his work). Because he was a great massive fan of football “when am I going to try to get my DL?” “Now, if you really want to,” said the trainer (not trainer as a shoe, trainer). “Thank you.”Said Sam. I’m really excited I thought to myself this could finally be it I could be driving my own car and just then I saw something very strange. “WHAT WAS THAT?” I shouted. Was it a flying saucer I did not know but now there is a case to crack…
02/11/2012 @ 03:38
wow Sam i loved it i loved the way you used the words next time mabe say o my gord what is that and then end of story but that was really good ceap it up
from Jade
23/10/2012 @ 18:50
WOW Sam pleeeaaase tell me what happens next!
Why not do a post on what happens…
23/10/2012 @ 11:22
wow sam love it
22/10/2012 @ 15:12
Hi im Callum, that is a grate blog you have writen thire but Mr Darling says check if it makes sence
22/10/2012 @ 15:08
Hi Sam, I am jack w from Mr Darling and i like football as well 🙂
22/10/2012 @ 15:02
Hi Sam, I am Danielle and i am from Mr Darling’s class and I love football 🙂
22/10/2012 @ 15:00
hello welcome to our blog, im Rebecca from lyons hall primary school and i really like the start of you 100 word challenge and some of the words in have in you challenge are like some of the words in my writing in year 6
Keep the great work up sam
Rebecca
22/10/2012 @ 14:58
This is a great story!I especially love this line:
Was it a flying saucer I did not know but now there is a case to crack…
Brilliant!
Carmen
22/10/2012 @ 14:58
Hello there Sam, I’m Chloe from 6M, your post sounds very interesting, don’t you think? I loved reading this.. I hopefully wanna get to do the 100 word challenge but I’m not very sure about it, I don’t think I have the confidence to take it on! Enough about me, I hope to hear more about te 100 word challenges soon.
Happy blogging!
Chloe 🙂
22/10/2012 @ 14:54
I like the way you discribed about how much you want your licence.and the way you puntuated it you could be a great writer when you older,well done
21/10/2012 @ 21:37
There is a case to crack indeed and I’d love to know what the findings are! It’s great that you started your story in an ordinary way and then something exciting begins to happen… Keep it up Sam.