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Filed under: Uncategorized — samf at 6:34 pm on Saturday, October 20, 2012  Tagged
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One sunny afternoon a twenty two year old was trying to get his driving licence so he could drive to football (his work). Because he was a great massive fan of football “when am I going to try to get my DL?” “Now, if you really want to,” said the trainer (not  trainer as a shoe, trainer). “Thank you.”Said Sam. I’m really excited I thought to myself this could finally be it I could be driving my own car and just then I saw something very strange. “WHAT WAS THAT?” I shouted. Was it a flying saucer I did not know but now there is a case to crack…



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   jade

02/11/2012 @ 03:38   Reply

wow Sam i loved it i loved the way you used the words next time mabe say o my gord what is that and then end of story but that was really good ceap it up

from Jade

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   josephineb

23/10/2012 @ 18:50   Reply

WOW Sam pleeeaaase tell me what happens next!

Why not do a post on what happens…

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   kallic

23/10/2012 @ 11:22   Reply

wow sam love it

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   callum

22/10/2012 @ 15:12   Reply

Hi im Callum, that is a grate blog you have writen thire but Mr Darling says check if it makes sence

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   Jack W

22/10/2012 @ 15:08   Reply

Hi Sam, I am jack w from Mr Darling and i like football as well :)

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   Danielle

22/10/2012 @ 15:02   Reply

Hi Sam, I am Danielle and i am from Mr Darling’s class and I love football :)

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   Rebecca

22/10/2012 @ 15:00   Reply

hello welcome to our blog, im Rebecca from lyons hall primary school and i really like the start of you 100 word challenge and some of the words in have in you challenge are like some of the words in my writing in year 6

Keep the great work up sam
Rebecca

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   Carmen

22/10/2012 @ 14:58   Reply

This is a great story!I especially love this line:

Was it a flying saucer I did not know but now there is a case to crack…

Brilliant!

Carmen

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   Chloe

22/10/2012 @ 14:58   Reply

Hello there Sam, I’m Chloe from 6M, your post sounds very interesting, don’t you think? I loved reading this.. I hopefully wanna get to do the 100 word challenge but I’m not very sure about it, I don’t think I have the confidence to take it on! Enough about me, I hope to hear more about te 100 word challenges soon.

Happy blogging!
Chloe :)

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   jamess

22/10/2012 @ 14:54   Reply

I like the way you discribed about how much you want your licence.and the way you puntuated it you could be a great writer when you older,well done

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   Mrs Darling

21/10/2012 @ 21:37   Reply

There is a case to crack indeed and I’d love to know what the findings are! It’s great that you started your story in an ordinary way and then something exciting begins to happen… Keep it up Sam.

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