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Filed under: Uncategorized — kallic at 2:20 pm on Tuesday, October 30, 2012
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One cold afternoon a girl was sitting down by a frozen lake having a picnic by herself.she ate a cupcake and because she just threw  it away then as she done that Micheal recycle swooped out and said “Hey you what did you that for ” but there was no ansewer maybe  she done it for fun? or maybe she didnt care? but nobody will no.but we have to get on with the story micheal said his speach to the girl her parents ran to there daughter and said “Oy what you doing to my sugarplum fairy”and ran away in disgust.



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   Chloe

02/11/2012 @ 12:25   Reply

I like your description Kalli, well done! Also your speech!

Chloe :)
Lyons Hall

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   Mrs darling

30/10/2012 @ 17:01   Reply

Kali… What a lovely opening to the start of your short story. I love the word ‘swooped’ Keep up your description!

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   mrsgurney

30/10/2012 @ 14:22   Reply

I really like your descriptions Kalli, good job! I also like your use of question and speech marks :-)
Mrs Gurney

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