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amys 100 wc#8

Filed under: Uncategorized — amyg at 7:03 pm on Friday, November 9, 2012
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one misty morning there was a little girl called Bella walking down the alley. Bella is 2years old and she has an older sister called Alissa she is 8 old. After Bella was about 4 years of age she went to her grandparent’s house to see them for a couple of hours. When they got home she said to Alissa that grandparents are important because they look after their family and because they care for you in September that same year Bella started school on her first day she met a new friend called April after a long year of working hard in her new school April and Bella was bff`s forever.

thank you for reading by amy



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   Chloe

16/11/2012 @ 19:13   Reply

Hello Amy!

This is very interesting, I love the fact you’ve written about families! Because it is, isn’t it?

Chloe 🙂
Mr Darling’s class

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   Mrs Fine 100WC Team

15/11/2012 @ 18:56   Reply

Hi Amy
I enjoyed reading your 100WC entry about grandparents and how you included 2 sisters in your story because it is all about families isn’t it? Be careful to write in the same tense throughout your piece, and check how old your characters are.

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