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alex wc #6

Filed under: Uncategorized — alexo at 6:11 pm on Friday, October 19, 2012

One day when spy’s were destroying there enemies they were getting fed up, so they threw a gas bomb in the secret room.

The next day the spy’s wouldn’t wake up, the sleep went on for 47 years.
Soon enough they woke up.

A few hours later one of spy’s checked the time but it was wrong so he changed it, but then he remembered that when he woke he wasn’t fussed then everything made sense that they had slept for so long.

So they all got in the time machine and they went back.



   Mrs Prior - Team 100WC

25/10/2012 @ 19:59   Reply

A great idea to use a time machine in your writing this week. Don’t forget to include the 100 word challenge prompt into your work though! I like your use of time connectives here.
Mrs Prior – Team 100WC

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