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100wc#4 by Lara

Filed under: Uncategorized — laraf at 3:41 pm on Friday, October 5, 2012
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Once there was a awesome man called The Weee (for waste and electronic, electrical and equipment) The Weee man is a 3.3-tonne structure. He is 7metres tall the average British house- hold throws away in a life time. He was made in 1984 and The Weee man is made out of mobile phones, dish washers and cables Ect. And he shows to start recycling and see what you can make out of it and people call him the creepy man because he looks creepy also fascinating to. The creepy man is where coronal is and he is fascinating to everyone.



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   gracet

08/10/2012 @ 13:04   Reply

Lara what a lot of coments and makin more see you later brownie chesse

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   Anna

07/10/2012 @ 10:59   Reply

Wow Lara, I love the idea of your story, well done for using brackets, that is one of my targets at school, next time instead of using etc use excreta. I like the way you used creepy and other adjectives to describe.
from your friend,
Anna
at
http://www.6d2012.highlawnprimary.net

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   gracet

06/10/2012 @ 13:22   Reply

FABOULS STORY LARA! Its was really interesting and WOW do I sound like a teaher

From Grace xx

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       laraf

    08/10/2012 @ 13:00   

    thanks cheese sticks

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   Alex

06/10/2012 @ 08:56   Reply

Hi Lara
I thought your description of weee man was amazing it is really interesting also i really liked
the recycling idea.

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   Miss Wells (Team 100wc)

05/10/2012 @ 16:56   Reply

Hi Lara, well done for completing the 100 word challenge. You have included a lot of detail about The Weee man and I thought the name Weee and its meaning was really imaginative. Remember to check your punctuation to make sure you have finished all sentences with full stops. Maybe next time you could try to vary how you start your sentences. As this was a descriptive piece you could have started some of your sentences with adjectives.
For example…
Bright, silver, and shimmering in the sun, the 3.3 tonne structure stood 7 metres tall.

Keep up the great writing, I look forward to reading more.

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   Holly

05/10/2012 @ 16:25   Reply

I like your blog it gives lots of information and a really good description of “The Weee”. I have been to the Eden project and seen The Weee.

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       gracet

    06/10/2012 @ 20:37   

    Wow was he really tall

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