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100 word challenge by cecilias #6

Filed under: Uncategorized — cecilias at 6:02 pm on Friday, October 19, 2012
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The shadow in the woods, 100 word challenge

CRASH BOOM BANG CRASH

“Agwang we have got to get out of here” screamed Syth.

BANG BASH “Don’t worry Syth I know we will get out of here!” answered Agwang suddenly there was a loud bumming noise, and BANG!!!

They ended up in a different world. It was all green and there were trees everywhere and it was as black as a witches cat.  It looked like the end of the world the moon was shining as it could ever be in a million years or maybe longer! Suddenly there was a big flash of something then FLASH again “what was that?” whispered Syth…….



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   Mrs Stones (Team 100WC)

27/10/2012 @ 17:08   Reply

Hi Cecilia,
This is a action packed piece of writing for the 100 Word Challenge that had me on the edge of my seat! I would love to know what happened next.
I like your description of the new world, especially the simile you have used.
Well done.
Mrs Stones

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   nadinem

23/10/2012 @ 11:24   Reply

WOW!!!!! I really like this story and i
like the name ,nadine

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   alfieh

23/10/2012 @ 11:22   Reply

better than every one else

from louisr :):)

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   mrsgurney

20/10/2012 @ 18:15   Reply

I really like your use of simile! Great writing Cecilia!
Mrs Gurney

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