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100wc#4 by Georgia

Filed under: Georgia,Quadblogging — georgiard at 3:32 pm on Friday, October 5, 2012
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Once upon a time there lived a glistened amazing monster that went to find a pet monster to play with him all day long. But the monster pet shop was closed because a gigantic-saurs with winning wicked black monster ate them all. The nice monster was in the army so he went to find the bad monster. The good monster name was William .The bad monster name was vampire .William found the bad monster. They fought and fought until one died William won so vampire was never seen again. 5 hours later the monster pet shop was open so Will was happy and got his pet monster



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   leyburnschool

06/10/2012 @ 21:40   Reply

Hi Georgia

What a great opening sentence to this week’s 100WC. You seem to have rushed the rest of your story as you could have included some great descriptions as you did at the start. However, I enjoyed reading your story and look forward to seeing more if your writing in future prompts.
Mrs Robinson 100WC Team

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