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100WC By Georogia #5

Filed under: Georgia — georgiard at 6:13 pm on Friday, October 19, 2012
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One Easter morning a little boy called Toby went  to get his Easter eggs from the fount door  but when Toby got to his fount door there was nothing there .Toby did  not know what to do because it was getting darker and darker he knew  the temperature dropped   suddenly and  Toby went  outside to  find  out  what was happing. So Toby found  his Easter  eggs in the bush, Toby found a trail  of eggs and led him to the old Easter egg museum. Toby could not get in there so he went round the back  Toby found a giant Easter egg there. And  he just rembered  it was his birthday.



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   Chloe

23/10/2012 @ 19:00   Reply

Hello Georgia, I’m Chloe from Lyons Hall Academy, welcome to the blogging! I love your post about Easter here.. I love where you’ve used a range of punctuation to make it fit in more with the post. All of it is perfect! Keep the fantastic work up, I see that you have put 100% effort into this.. excellent.

Chloe :)

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   ruthmc

23/10/2012 @ 12:00   Reply

WOW what a good story;):)

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   cameronsp

23/10/2012 @ 11:19   Reply

nice one gorgea and i want a big easter egg

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   Rebecca

22/10/2012 @ 15:07   Reply

Hello welcome to our blog i am Rebecca from Lyons hall primary school and i really think you have put 100% effor into your work and some of the words in you challenge are like some of the words in my writing in year 6

keep you the 100% effort and i hope to visit your blog again and see some nore great work

well done
Rebecca

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   jamess

22/10/2012 @ 15:04   Reply

Hi, great blog i think it is very interesting,well done.

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   Eleanor

22/10/2012 @ 15:00   Reply

Welcome to our blog Im Eleanor I really like the words you’ve used they are like some of the words I use in Year 6.
I like it where you’ve used the connectives

Eleanor from Lyons Hall :*)

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   elri

22/10/2012 @ 14:57   Reply

This story is a mystery. Why were’nt the easter eggs there?Great discription,I wish that I had that big easter egg.

Lyons Hall.

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   Mrs Darling

21/10/2012 @ 21:40   Reply

Georgia – what a lovely short story and it made me wish that it was Easter. I love the way you said it was getting darker and darker (setting the scene) and then the temperature dropped. Great work and I can’t wait to read more of your writing!

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